For our new project thingy, I decided to rewrite and revise my research paper. I decided to focus on sentence fluency and formatting. My sentences are choppy and hard to understand, so that is a big thing that I need to work on. I formatted my citations list wrong and embedded my quotations wrong, too.
The reason I chose to do this paper is because it was fun for me. I liked how we got to chose our own topic that interested us. Some of my sentences are not clear and don't make much sense. I have a "Dating Spiderman" quote that I need to fix, too.
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Emma, I think formatting is a good choice for you because of issues with your works cited list. But sentence fluency was one of your strongest rubric scores. Please make sure you address some of the other issues mentioned in the comments and rubric for the paper.
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